Nikki Reaper- Haunted Hallway Special

Since i woke up early and have a few hours to kill,i may as well help out and critique Some of your marvelous pieces.
First of all i would like to say i envy all the models you design for.You have advanced so much with technique such as patterns,fashion styles,makeup,and hair.(zomg,haaaiirrr ;__<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>
First design:I love the use of black in here and the lightish violet.The hair gradient is well drawn and i like the use of pink as it enlightens the whole piece.The spiky shoulder thingy is a great accesory,and i do like how it curves around her chest,although perhaps a color gradient with some light rock candy pink in the skull would enlighten the piece against the print of the dress.I understand that the dress is supposed to be plain and brought out with accesories,but i think the pink used in the lines is too dark,and perhaps a color gradient in the pink would be awesome and bring out the light playfull violet and skull.Her style is pretty girly too,so maybe some childish glitter glue type thing on the black would be pretty,in which case the silvery earrings would not be nessesary and you could make them the same color as the platform.I can't really see the earrings and what they are but they are beautiful,although if the platform and heel of the shoe were the same color(the silvery tone)as the earrings it would be a nice touch.Although the violety purple isn't my favorite color on nikki,the white and purple in the shoes really compliment each other.Although,i do dislike the plain purple and the plain tip of the shoe,and if the tip of the shoe was the same print as on the dress it would appear much more detailed.I have never really liked names in platforms or heels but this is starting to change my mind.The etchy,death-note likeness of the letters is fantastic,although i do see some other ideas that could be used instead(such as a stack of skulls,the earring motif ect) instead of the letters since they appear nowhere else in the outfit.(the letters could be used in some streety outfit ona cropped shirt or a large clunky belt for example)The eye makeup i like,but would of preferred perhaps a darker tone than the violet that is used very often in the outfit,and made the lips perhaps a light sugary pink,but hey,you may of tried that and not liked it,so your judgement over mine.
Second design<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="377" title=" (Eek)"/>mamarymotherofgawd.First off can i compliment you on how jealous you are making me from that incredible hair.I love how you are incorporating your style and the MH fashion style with the newer 'in' styles such as pastel goth and pastel grunge,it really proves how you can adapt yourself as an artist and as a designer.I like how you have parted the hair quite naturally and i love the headpiece,although it is a little shame that the silver is only found again on the earrings,accesories and buckles,it wold of been nice to see it on the platforms of her shoes.(i think the slver compliments the black in her hair and i understand that this is a more natural piece,but the silver wold be just so pretty again the pink sheen on the black shoes)This design is my favorite(the third being close behind it)The choker,arm bracelet and finger glove i can not fault and they are the perfect accesories.The shirt/short combos thing is incredible,the girlyness and silky,slippery feel of it is perfect for the character.The light pink is erfect,although perhaps a small darker pink gradient on the edges would look even better,or instead the gradient on the top/bottom/both of the leggings that(although i love the color and sheen of them)appear too plainly colored in comparison,or perhaps instead avery light skull print would be very MonsterHigh.The darker pink netty fabric is brilliant,you pulled it off withought making it intrusive,actually very binding the whole farbic and design.I love the frills on the shoes and the shape of the platforms,the earrings are beautiful(me want,as i do the rest of this outfit)but i do realise there aren't as many decals on the outfit as there could be.(the buckles could be heart shaped for example to match the earrings)I dont really like the stripes of black in the netting glove ,and i think perhaps that the netting gove as itself would be perfect,perhaps with some black bangles,perhaps one with a buckle,or heart decal on it.
Third Design:Can i just say although it;s different from her usual color pallette(which is also awesome,since it's kind of evolving,advancing itself,broadening itself to more varied styles,patterns and colors)The colors in the hair are incredibly appealing.She really looks like she spent some time on it,if i had hair like that i would spend all day long just admiring it.The lighting on it makes it look delicious.Although,i don't understand the trademark look of this line,(no telltale prints,looks ect)i do see thatis there is some sever difference,ehancement of character from one look to another,which is when they are posessed,or 'haunted'as the line states,by Spectra or the oc you and TheMonsterManiac share,Phantasma?(did i geddit right?: D huh?HUUHH?*persists like a six year old who wants icecream*)So i do get that there is more..sharp,almost awkwardly supreme qualities from one look to another,but i do think the black hair in the middle is too much.The shoulders,the sharp material,the spikes and black in the outfit already are very bossy(heh)and the curve in the hair is un-needed.The makeup i like here,although it is very bold and contrasting against her (BLLUUUEEE)eyes,but i think that is done purposly.The only thing i would change would be make the purpley strip down her eye silver t compliment the earrings.I just want to say real quick i really appreciate the entire construction of the design,it looks so haute couture*posh french voice*and it looks like it holds everything in place really well.The black is perfect,the top,i don't think i could love any more and it doesn't need much else.If ony they made tops like that that are sellable.i would wear it every day.I love the pointy hearts,the bare stomach too(i draw them waaay too much..)the only thing i can say,is perhaps to have stopped the hem at halfway of the calf and stopped the climbing studded straps around the ankle,perhaps bunched around the ankle as if falling down.The reddish pink of the shoes i like,i do not like the wedge as much,i think perhaps you could of made up some light pink oozy heart thing as you did with the top(god i love that thing)Okay,i know i said i liked the second one best but this one is my absolute favorite having gone through and appreciated the details.I love the biker look to it and how you made that patch around her thighs and crotch,it looks comfortable somehow.The earrings add to the sharpness of the whole thing and compliment the choker.
the background is really nice and swirls the difference of the designs together among their similarities.I do like how there are too daughters of death in this line but how different they are.these designs are some of your best,well done!I hope you appreciate the critique and it has done some good,i look forward to seeing more art from you as i always do when i see it in my inbox.
love,Crafty.
P.S:Tell me if you ever see anything alike that third design's top online so i can pirahna fangirl over it and buy it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="454" title="Wink/Razz"/>